Về luận học bổng, mình muốn đưa ra cho các bạn một số bài luận xin học bổng hay (dạng đoạn mẫu) trả lời một số câu hỏi thường gặp trong bài luận. Các bài này được team Sandla sưu tầm từ nhiều nguồn và sau đó tổng hợp lại các ý lát cắt hay để mọi người tham khảo. Mình mong sẽ có ích cho mọi người và sớm nhận tin báo “hỷ” từ mọi người nhé.
Hãy viết tóm tắt về bản thân bạn.
John Ling là một chàng trai trẻ có động lực đặc biệt với bằng Cử nhân Kỹ thuật của Đại học Bắc Kinh. Sau khi làm Kỹ sư hóa học cho Exxon tại Trung Quốc, John rời quê hương và chuyển đến Hoa Kỳ. Không có gia đình hay bạn bè, anh phải đối mặt với thử thách khó khăn là tự hỗ trợ, thành thạo tiếng Anh và chuẩn bị cho việc ghi danh cuối cùng vào một chương trình MBA. Dù bất kỳ khó khăn gì đi nữa, anh cũng đã vượt lên chính mình và có một bài luận xin học bổng hay để giành lấy học bổng.
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John Ling is an exceptionally motivated young man with a BS in Engineering from the University of Beijing. After working as a Chemical Engineer for Exxon in China, John left his native country and relocated to the United States. Without family or friends, he faced the daunting challenge of supporting himself, mastering English and preparing for his eventual enrollment in an MBA program. Fortunately, John’s adaptive skills helped the transformation go smoothly. He embraced the opportunity to learn more about western society by simultaneously enrolling in school and starting a new job.
He accepted a position as a manager of a local upscale restaurant and quickly advanced to a district manager’s position. The CEO was impressed by John’s interpersonal skills and his ability to assume more responsibility. Within a few months, John rescheduled the workload within his district, improved the customer service and implemented a quality control program. After just two years with his firm, he is considered senior management material.
While advancing in his restaurant career, John also achieved academic success at Lake Placid Community College. Classes in business, economics, and law provided a deep understanding of the rules and business practices in the western hemisphere. John’s dual work and college responsibilities greatly challenged his time-management skills. Many nights he had only a few hours of sleep, yet by becoming increasingly efficient, he juggled his multiple roles. John’s resilience, stamina and lust for knowledge helped him to overcome seemingly insurmountable obstacles on his path to success.
Despite his hectic schedule, John always finds time for social and community activities. He took a leadership role in organizing the first International Student Club on campus. He negotiated the structure and financing of the club with the administration, wrote articles and organized the first meetings. For his efforts, John was proud to be chosen as the club’s first President. John also works tirelessly for the Brethren, a volunteer group that helps Asian immigrants assimilate into American society. Since 2000, he has organized four fundraisers for the group and secured housing for 23 Chinese exchange students in the Lake Placid community. New York City Mayor Rudolph Giuiani wrote a glowing reference letter for John, praising his tireless efforts in the Asian-American community.
John shows an uncanny ability to apply his skills in diverse environments. He demonstrated incredible motivation by his willingness to start at the bottom, leaving a secure life in China to pursue a western business degree. John’s references all cite his friendliness, cooperative work ethic and willingness to help others. His versatility is excellent preparation for the intensity of Sloan’s MBA program. After just three years in the United States, John achieved a composite GMAT score of 760, which is nearly impossible for someone who is not a native speaker of English. Clearly, John has the “right stuff” to succeed in a corporate environment and fulfill his aspirations. He will make a unique and valuable contribution to our next class.
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Bạn có thể mô tả thách thức lớn nhất và cách giải quyết nó để tạo nên một bài luận xin học bổng hay.
“Theo yêu cầu của quản lý cấp cao, tôi làm việc như một nhà tư vấn nội bộ cho một dự án điều tra hiệu suất và tinh thần của nhân viên trong một bộ phận gặp khó khăn. Trong cuộc họp đầu tiên mà tôi cố gắng tạo điều kiện, trưởng nhóm đã chi phối cuộc thảo luận và cố gắng áp đặt quan điểm của mình lên các thành viên còn lại trong nhóm. Tôi nhanh chóng nhận ra rằng anh ta chống lại dự án vì anh ta là một phần chính của vấn đề. Thay vì ủng hộ những nỗ lực của tôi để khuyến khích thảo luận và đạt được sự đồng thuận, ông đã phản đối bất kỳ giải pháp nào có thể bao gồm việc sắp xếp lại hoặc thay đổi lãnh đạo trong bộ phận của mình.”
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At the request of senior management, I served as an internal consultant for a project that investigated employee performance and morale in a troubled division. During the first meeting that I tried to facilitate, the team leader dominated the discussion and tried to impose his views on the rest of the group. I quickly realized that he resisted the project because he was a primary part of the problem. Rather than support my efforts to encourage discussion and reach a consensus, he opposed to any solution that might include a reorganization or leadership change in his division.
After the first meeting, he invited me to lunch to discuss the project. When I raised my concerns, he said, “Don’t worry, I will make this project easy for you.” To my surprise, he asked me to ignore the project plan that his boss had proposed and agree to his predetermined solution. In his mind, the existing problems were exaggerated and not worth major changes in the division. He asked me to direct the team toward his agenda of maintaining the status quo, which would avoid exposing any unnecessary problems to upper management. In fact, he already had a plan in mind that would address several minor problems.
His suggestion was a direct violation of my cultural and religious beliefs, which support integrity, freedom and equality. As the facilitator, it was my responsibility to solve the problem to the satisfaction of the entire team, not just the team leader. Sadly, this man expected me to violate my own ethical principles to further his own agenda. At first, I politely explained that we both had an obligation to promote the company’s values. His idea was risky and could have a negative impact on employee morale. When he refused to abandon his plan, I advised him that I simply could not support him. Changes in the division would be determined by group consensus, not by one person’s opinion.
After our lunch meeting, I hoped that the team leader would abandon his misguided plan, but he did not. As the project moved forward, other team members started to realize that he was pushing a predetermined plan that did not honestly address their problems. With mixed emotions, I reported the situation to management, who put the project on hold. Four weeks later, the team leader was transferred to another department and was replaced by a new leader who was committed to the original project. With his support, I helped the team successfully complete the project in a manner that was consistent with my core values.
Tại sao lại chọn trường của chúng tôi?
“Khi tôi chuẩn bị cho sự nghiệp về luật tài chính, chương trình JD / MBA tại Đại học Chicago là nơi lý tưởng cho tôi. Vị trí trường học trên Magnificent Mile mang đến một góc nhìn độc đáo về những thách thức và cơ hội trong thị trường hàng hóa đầy biến động. Trong chuyến tham quan khuôn viên, tôi ghi nhận sự gần gũi của Hội đồng Thương mại Chicago, cùng với nhiều trung tâm chính phủ và trung tâm văn hóa ở trung tâm thành phố. Trạm dừng Metro trong khuôn viên trường khiến toàn bộ thế giới này dễ dàng tiếp cận.”
Đây là những ý ăn điểm trong một bài luận xin học bổng hay, các bạn cùng đọc qua nhé!
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As I prepare for a career in financial law, the JD / MBA program at the University of Chicago is an ideal place for me. The school’s location on the Magnificent Mile offers a unique perspective of the challenges and opportunities in the volatile commodities market. During my campus tour, I noted the close proximity of the Chicago Board of Trade, along with numerous government centers and cultural hubs in the center of the city. The Metro stop on campus makes this entire world easily accessible. I was also impressed by the vibrant international feel of the campus and surrounding metropolitan area, where global decisions are made each day. What better place to begin my career?
As one of the few top universities to offer a dual JD / MBA program, Chicago acknowledges the need to provide comprehensive training to candidates with career aspirations in financial law. The benefits to the students are immeasurable. While I pursue my coursework in torts and contracts, I can compete for an internship at the IMF or Chicago Board of Trade. Upon graduation, I will be conversant in all aspects of financial management and forensic accounting and will be qualified to investigate cases of investor fraud, improper accounting and SEC violations. Exposure to a government agency at this stage of my life will provide a solid foundation for my eventual career.
My final motivating factor to attend the University of Chicago is its unparalleled reputation in the academic, business and political communities. Several of my colleagues at JP Morgan are Chicago alumni, who have cited their satisfaction with their classes, professors, internships and campus life. During my visit to the school, I was impressed by the first-class facilities and demonstrated commitment to graduate teaching. I am also excited about the opportunity to pursue relevant volunteer activities on the Chicago campus.
For several years, I have worked as an advisor to the Lexington chapter of Entrepreneurial Kids, a non-profit agency that locates funding for viable student businesses. I have also enjoyed considerable success mentoring high school students who are eager to pursue an entrepreneurial career. While in Chicago, I will lend my support to the local chapter of Fast Start, which has an excellent reputation for its community education program for the self-employed. Through the local Big Brothers program, I can also continue my volunteer work as a mentor for teenaged boys with special needs. Chicago offers an unparalleled opportunity to work in these areas and to share my expertise with a new generation of talented kids.
After I graduate, Chicago’s business and legal community will offer intriguing challenges for my skills in business law. With its large concentration of publicly-held companies, the area struggles to attract and retain qualified candidates who specialize in forensic accounting. Following graduation, I hope to work in this area, where I assist with SEC investigations. Armed with an exceptional education from Chicago, I will be well prepared to keep abreast of the rapidly-evolving technology that is used to solve white-collar crimes. I am eager to take my place in this vibrant intellectual community.
Trên đây là tổng hợp vài bài luận xin học bổng hay, các bạn hãy cùng tham khảo nhé!
Nguồn: Sandla.org – Tuệ Minh Sưu tầm
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